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earth decided to take ballet lessons
from the moon--as you see
moon can spin beautifully
and earth wasn't jealous,
no,
earth had lots of things to grow
but earth took ballet lessons anyways
earth decided to do a pirouette
with moon--they had a tête-à-tête
but earth was new to spinning so fast
earth spun too far left and passed
sun on its merry way
who shone brighter in surprise
glaciers on earth's mountaintops
caught the beams and shivered
in delight
they glowed crimson
sweet and bright
but only for a moment's time
as earth righted on its feet
earth found spinning rather neat
our solstice passed
earth learned ballet
and glaciers learned
alpenglow
from the moon--as you see
moon can spin beautifully
and earth wasn't jealous,
no,
earth had lots of things to grow
but earth took ballet lessons anyways
earth decided to do a pirouette
with moon--they had a tête-à-tête
"turn and bow down to the sun--
sun taught me, and we mustn't
forget to be grateful"
but earth was new to spinning so fast
earth spun too far left and passed
sun on its merry way
who shone brighter in surprise
glaciers on earth's mountaintops
caught the beams and shivered
in delight
they glowed crimson
sweet and bright
but only for a moment's time
as earth righted on its feet
earth found spinning rather neat
our solstice passed
earth learned ballet
and glaciers learned
alpenglow
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Letter to the Mother
Mom,
how can you throw me out
saying you want me to stay?
How can you ground me at home
and still push me away?
Why can't you tell me: "I'm proud"?
Instead of: "You're not good enough".
You're angry with me when I'm sad,
You punish me when I laugh.
Why do I have to be perfect?
"You have to be better than 'them'"!
Is it too much to ask,
to love me the way that I am?
And yet you still ask yourself:
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Society's Fix
"Society's Fix"
by Taylor Colbert
"Are you depressed?
Here's a pill.
Are you crazy?
Here's a pill.
Are you hurting?
Here's a pill.
Are you fat?
Here's a pill.
Are you skinny?
Here's a pill.
Oh, you want a pill for
no good reason? Here you go!
Hey there, my name is society!
I'm here to give you some pills.
There's nothing wrong with you, you say?
Oh, well that doesn't matter!
After you take this, there'll be
plenty wrong with you!
And what do you do then? That's simple!
You come to me and I will give you "legal"
pills that are basically no better than
the illegal stuff.
I, society, will fix you.
I will create your pro
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Broken Bipolar
They judge me by what my darker side contians,
Instead of the real me holding its reins,
Which does not conform to its hate,
Also called its bipolar state.
They laugh, they mock, they break my heart,
All without giving a hope for a new start.
It leaves me broken inside.
But no matter where I hide,
They will find me.
Will I ever be free?
Free of the hate and scorn,
Free of being broken and torn.
But for as long as I live, "free" is only in dreams.
So what is life to me? More impossible for me, it seems.
So I step in line with other broken souls,
And watch my life breaking like ancient china bowls.
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Fun poetry.
Prompt from
Solstice, Glacier.
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Alpenglow is a natural occurence when light bends in earth's atmosphere. You see it almost every day when the sun is setting and the sky turns a rainbow gradient colour.
Sometimes this occurs when the light bends and hits a mountain's face. The mountains turn brilliant shades of yellow, orange and sometimes a deep crimson.
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Any critique on the structure of this poem, plus the awkward rhyming phrases, would really help!
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Prompt from
Solstice, Glacier.
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Alpenglow is a natural occurence when light bends in earth's atmosphere. You see it almost every day when the sun is setting and the sky turns a rainbow gradient colour.
Sometimes this occurs when the light bends and hits a mountain's face. The mountains turn brilliant shades of yellow, orange and sometimes a deep crimson.
[link]
[link]
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Any critique on the structure of this poem, plus the awkward rhyming phrases, would really help!
Received a feature Here. DLD on June 25th
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main art account:
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What an interesting way of turning something simple into something new. I like the whole ballet idea of it.