Have you ever stopped a fire's fall?
How have you helped prevent society's suicide?
Would any kind readers please explain to me how to properly fix this so it flows better? ...I have a deep desire to gravitate away from my impassioned, amatuer attempts at poetry with a message. Any critique is welcomed with desperation.
Wrote this one day in History class after seeing a WWII movie.
Needless to say it gave me a deep impression...
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